SUSAN BORDO'S QUICK WRITE.

With the 3rd quote chosen,i totally disagree with it because as it is,modern men do care about their looks because staying meticulous accomplishes alot considering first impression.Some things done by men are considered feminine with an example of the use of a hair dryer which is used basically to dry wet hair not specifying that it was meant for women.my ad projects a modern man with a preppy look yet with a profound "rock" look.In this information age,it is somewhat fair for men to stay conscious of their looks and that in no way is feminine or should be considered as such.

OUTLINE FOR PAPER # 1

FORMAL OUTLINE


Preliminary Thesis: A leaner and a rock makes a better man

I. 1st supporting point: Metropolitan look of the clothes appeals to masculinity
  A. classic but urbanely combined appearance
     1.pose of confidence with hands pocketed
     2.projecting attention with opened coat buttons with an inner yellow sweater
  B.Urban men have a use for odd color combination of clothes than those in the country.
     1.Professionalism
     2.Any type of man can put on these vintage classic fits of clothes provided they can afford

II. 2nd supporting point: Soft and pensive appearance.
   A.Clean shave and introspective look
     1.Retro and rock touch concealed in facial
     2.The next guy's eyes are cut off exhibiting secrecy.
    B.men are expected to portray a strict,upright and trusting discipline.

III. 3rd supporting point: The new professionalism which combines both a retro,leaner and urban attitude.
    A. professional men of today make it a point to stay physically fit.
      1.consideration of  the dress code and the facials combined introduces a new era of conventional retro.
      B.conclusion of add comes within the brand name and it's history of patronage from both blue and white   collared men.